A Passionate Wish by Juliana Blossom

From Goodreads

Rosaline traced her gaze back to the beginning of the sentence for the third time; the words she could recite, but the meanings kept eluding her. Peeking over the edge of the book, she glanced at the darkened rectangle that was her phone.

Sitting quietly on the other side of the table, it displayed no movement except for the pixels that made up the digits of time rearranging themselves to catch up to the new reality, bringing no trace of what had been into what was now.

She wished she could do just that, erasing the past like the pixels on her screen, and that ironic thought made her lift her gaze from the book and release a bitter chuckle, expecting to see the bustling of a late afternoon cafe in a summer afternoon.


What met her gaze instead, was a pair of piercing dark eyes with amusement dancing around their corners. They belonged to a tall broad man with long steady strides. The warm afternoon sun bounced from his unruly dark hair, coloring it the shade of dark chocolate, highlighting the defined angles of his cheekbones and the perfectly chiseled jawline. His shirt was casually wrinkled, exuding that kind of devil-may-care confidence. He was gorgeous, and he had no business making his way towards her.

She opened her mouth, and then closed it, feeling the heat of his gaze on her cheeks. A commotion out the window caught her attention. A lone starling shot off from the grassy ground in a frenzy, a puffed-up magpie fluttering its black-ringed wings in its wake, making a cacophony of squeals and feathers. When the starling vanished into the tress beyond, merging into one of the speckles on the window, Rosaline's gaze drifted back to Gabriel, who was turning around from the spectacle to meet her eyes.

My thoughts

My thanks to the Publishers via NetGalley for the opportunity to read this in exchange for an honest review.

At around a 100 pages or so, this is a short novella style length read. I gave this a 2 stars or 4/10.

It was an alright read, but at times it became a little confusing especially with the introduction of the Order! This seemed to appear out of nowhere in my opinion and wasn't really developed properly. Telling the story of a rushed relationship that soon became a sexual one between Gabriel and Rosaline.

Personally I feel that the story could have done with some better editing and a little more direction. I know it's not always easy when trying to relate a story, if it's only a short one or novella length.

I would have liked to know more about the Order and for there to be a little more of a back story to the characters as I feel that this could have been quite a good premise to the story if it had been developed more.